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My Heart Desires You...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:10:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Each and every day
As the sands of time slip by
With every passing minute
I think about you and then I sigh
Picture a perfect rainbow
After an early springtime shower
The honey making bee buzzes
Hovering over a pollen filled flower
I fall into a daydream
Where visions of you are cast
The true desires of my heart
Come flowing in so vast
I meet you in the meadow
Underneath the sky so blazen and blue
Where you serenade my heart
As I make sweet love to you
We lay amidst the asters
Lilies and daisies too
A field of forget-me-nots
For my love for you is so true
A soft breeze blows gently
My daydream slowly fades
The sun partially shadowed
As the evening starts to shade
Once again I'm left standing
With my loving thoughts of you
Until time is kind enough
To help see this dream come true...
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mina-1
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2005-05-27 00:10:58]
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Skinney86 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:21:41 AM AEST
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Very full of emotions,
"A soft breeze blows gently
My daydream slowly fades
The sun partially shadowed
As the evening starts to shade"
A like how is all is just a dream! |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:34:54 AM AEST
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Sue, what a beautiful write, as always. I love the ending and I sure hope you get your wish...Your poetry is like a ray of sunshine; always brightening my day!
*NOTE TO EVERYONE* Read this girls stuff especially when you need some cheering up!!
lol I'm serious. Your poetry rocks!
Scorp. |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Jimmato on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:47:21 AM AEST
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| lovely imagery, I found when reading that the flow got all messed around in places because you'd establish a rythm then go off course with too many or too few beats only to return at an odd moment. |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:28:36 AM AEST
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| lovely well written and great flow |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:14:00 AM AEST
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Welcome back friend. I remember u saying something about getting your life straite.
Great-n-beautifull write.
smiles, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:46:58 AM AEST
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| That is a wonderful and lovely write. A wonderful dream in hopes that it will come true. I could envision the scene with the way you wrote this. This was really great to read! |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:19:14 AM AEST
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| Wow Sue beautiful poem ,,I loved it so I thank you for the good read,,, |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Masked_Man on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:16:03 AM AEST
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This was not written by pen..
but by emotion.
I love it
One of the best I've read here yet.
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:54:44 AM AEST
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How are you? hope things are a little better for you now.
This was a beautiful write and a really lovely dream. Thank you for taking me there.
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:16:19 PM AEST
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A romantic work of art, worthy of the highest praises by the heart itself, extremely heart
felth, breathtaking writting that only soul feels
and is capable of recipricating . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by sride686 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:23:21 PM AEST
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| A great write Sue and I’m glad you still have beautiful dreams I just wish these dreams could come true for you. But in tell they do I love to read these sweet dreams and imagine they are mine. Thanks for soothing my soul with yet another beautiful heart felt write filled with so much love. Bye for now Sue much love always your friend….Steve |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by somedaylove on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:54:21 PM AEST
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| sigh.........i can so relate to this one...... beautiful write once again keep it up |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:41:36 PM AEST
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beautiful and moving, sue... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:02:40 PM AEST
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That is so romantically written without anything even missing! I love the writer & lover in you so ture & it makes me wanna just hold you until the end of time my heart shall prove!! I LOVE IT ALOT SUE!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!! |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:44:14 AM AEST
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Sue..
This write BLEEDS with emotion...
'Tis your liquid soul poured on paper...
and I love it..
B |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 02:50:35 PM AEST
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WOW !
Such a beautful write.
Sinned |
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Re: My Heart Desires You...
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:09:56 PM AEST
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"Lovely"
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