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Darkness into light
Contributed by
skinney86
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:47:48 PM in AEST
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I woke up in a terrible daze,
Not knowing what happened
All i saw was darkness, like a maze.
I felt as though this would be the end,
That this mood wasn't just a phase
I thought i would never find my way
I thought i would never find the light
But I found my way, what can i say.
That special person gave me the sight.
She made the darkness fade to light.
Made the stars comeback out at night
That is why i love you with all my might
You make my knees weak when i see you
You make my heart jump when we touch
The feelings I'm having for you i never knew
I never thought I'd love someone this much
And no matter what people want to say..
We don't need them to tell us the way
We will always know how we feel inside
And i will know that until the day i die.
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skinney86
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2005-05-26 23:47:48]
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Re: Darkness into light
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:51:09 PM AEST
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Very powerful, beautifull write.
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Re: Darkness into light
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:26:30 AM AEST
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| This was a good write...You maybe went a little overboard with the rhyming. I like the way you end it. Scorp. |
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Re: Darkness into light
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:12:30 AM AEST
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A strong, passionate and beautiful write. You've expressed yourself so well. Goodluck to u and ur girl.
*hugs*
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