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Your Morning Glow
Contributed by
wizard
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:57:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The shimmer of your evening glow,
Summons every glare,
Supple skin - enchanting eyes,
Evoking every stare
Scorching lips, so benign,
Brimming with lust, beckoning mine
At last they connect, our hearts conjoined,
Your loving soul fills my empty void,
We drift into slumber,
Your body cradled in mine,
If dawn never comes,
We'll remain here...sublime
I rise with the sun,
You...absorbing its ray
Behold your morning glow,
Shining brighter than day
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-05-26 21:57:55]
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:09:53 PM AEST
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love filled..
she must be something special
as your words 'bout her surley are..
great write bro..
B |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:16:33 PM AEST
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| Hello again! I remembered that I had read your poem called One by One, is that right? I'm sorry if it's not...Anywayz, I think this poem is an enourmous leap from the other one of yours that I read. This poem is very beautiful and full of detail. I love the use of the word 'sublime' It really describes the beauty of the moment you're portraying. Great work! |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:17:23 PM AEST
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Wow, talk about somebody being enchanted. This is beautiful.
Smile,
Rita |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:32:06 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and elegant, Great write. |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:43:59 PM AEST
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| Oh, this was beautiful, just beautiful! Lucky lady, and you too, by the sounds of it...Very nice write!! Scorp. |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:59:22 PM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull but then who would expect any thing less from a wizard?
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by Masked_Man on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:20:55 AM AEST
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Wizard..
You've cast a spell with words
so beautiful and poignant
for your pen is magic..
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:29:34 PM AEST
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beautifully romantic, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by brew on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 08:20:44 PM AEST
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Somber............that is what I felt with this write......you have it good, and keep that. Deep, and flowing, romantic.
Brew~ |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 01:03:49 AM AEST
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Breath takingly beautiful. Filled with so much love for ur some very lucky lady. Your talent shines radinatly through ur work. Well done.
*hugs*
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: Your Morning Glow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 06:58:43 PM AEST
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Second last stanza is, by FAR my favourite.
*sigh*
What a glorious and wonderful enchantment that is . . . beautifully
heart-stirring. The emotions you have evoked here leave me quite
breathless. But that line, that one line . . . "Your body cradled in mine"
Gosh . . . I could never articulate clearly, just what that does to me.
Stunning. Every word.
breathless still
~Breezy |
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