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Who are you?
Contributed by
TheKid
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:44:37 PM in AEST
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I stare at the warm and breezy sea
Oddly, to the left of my eye, I see a stunningly beautiful bee
She was Buzzing along
As if nothing was wrong
She flew onto the palm of my gentle hand
What she was doing I could hardly understand
One of lifes greatest lessons, I was about to be told
She told me to cherish it like a pot of gold
The charming bee asked sharply, "Who are you?"
Seconds turned into few
I felt terrible, as if I failed an exam
She told me the suprising answer, "I think, therfore, I am"
The power to think differently
Quicker then a blink or a wink
Makes you who you are
She left my hand, and I felt bizarre
Towards the sea she flew
Eventually becoming out of view
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2005-05-26 21:44:37]
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Re: Who are you?
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by Fears on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:51:39 PM AEST
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| alllrrriiiggghhhhttt....i dont understand |
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Re: Who are you?
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:15:52 PM AEST
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I'm not sure I understand it either...
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Re: Who are you?
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by GAMEchief on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 05:31:29 PM AEST
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Based on something that really happened? I mean, I know a bee didn't talk to you, but I can understand if that's what you were thinking when this happened.
If this isn't based on a real life experience, then I'm lost as to the purpose of it. |
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