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pain lined with silver
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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im feeling this now
and i cant hold on
no one can save me
im just a lost memory
a dead silence
withering in my room alone
im trying to kill my pain with your kiss
hoping you wont notice this
tear
as it rolls down my cheek
but you pull my face away
when i thought my happiness would only be exsistent in my death
you brought me back to life
words were not said
about the tears i shed
just being there in your arms
listening to you
y o u
you saved me.
and now the pain that i feel
is lined in silver
im wanting so bad to tell you how i feel...
wanting so bad to say
i love you... baby always
... E v e r y d a y ...
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bttrflynajar
... [
2005-05-26 21:26:02]
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Re: pain lined with silver
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:37:14 PM AEST
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| Very nice, I like the emotion in it. I'm glad you found someone like this =) |
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Re: pain lined with silver
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:44:05 PM AEST
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I hope you feel better
jhehe
great write |
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Re: pain lined with silver
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:03:36 PM AEST
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This was very good. It flowed quite well, and was well-worded. Keep it up!
Scorp. |
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