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A Princess's Loyality

Contributed by ChichiriFreak on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

A Plan was to set hold,
A Secret left to be untold.
Given to the hand of the Enemy,
A Princess, which was she
A Princess holding a Flowers' beauty,
Holding the “White Water Rivers’ purity.
The key to unlock the plan,
To take down this virtuous man.

The Plan was set.
The Criteria met.
Daughter of an Eternal Tiger,
Sister of the Forever Conqueror,
Set now to play her part,
Not knowing the real actor…
Was Thy Heart.

Thy Heart stole the show,
And followed the “King” to ever he go.
Back to the land of his,
Bearing farewell and adieu,
New found home, in the lands of ChengDu.

A Plan meant to hold,
A Secret now left to be un fold.
A trap of death now purified.
A trap of love now two hearts, unified.

Princess Wu,
Came to leave the land of ChengDu,
With beloved son,
But fate was not to be done.
Princess Wu taken back to her old home
Leaving her “King” all alone.

Only as cruel fate had come,
The Fire of Wu awoke the Dawn
Of an end of a Flowers Life,
Too much grief, Too much strife.
No more do the birds of life sing.
The wrenching discovery of Yiling.
Down into the river of tears, wash away thy love.
Once again, together, with the stars Above.

The Plan which was set
The Secret which was never kept
A Hearts' last Bow
To be at rest now.

Thy Heart stole the show,
And followed the “King” to ever he go.

Copyright Â© ChichiriFreak ... [ 2005-05-26 21:12:53]
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Re: A Princess's Loyality (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:19:07 PM AEST
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This poem is absolutely amazing. You've accomplished a rather difficult thing in poetry: the combination of making a poem into a story. They rhyming is also excellent, it's not forced or rearranged. To make stories out of poems is a rare talent, continue to utilize it, it will take you far.

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