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The Monster in My Bed
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Night falls
Of this time I am afraid
Of sleepless creatures
Causing my dreams to fade
Sleep does escape
Deprivation is all I know
As it flees my blood-shot eyes
My soul it does forgo
Oh no….
I can feel HER beneath my skin
She lingers
Behind the light
Flowing through my fingers
It is within
This darksome hour
I silently pray for…
Refuge
Salvation
As depression does devour
Here she comes
The one who begs for death
The suicidal girl
The one who cuts herself
While seeing her life unfurl
Enclosing darkness
That sinks into these veins
While I lay with
-The monster in my bed-
*********
Along with the bloody stains
*******
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-05-26 20:50:14]
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Re: The Monster in My Bed
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:15:12 PM AEST
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If I'm not mistaken, this 'monster' is the narrator, or a part of the narrator's mind. The sense of feeling and touch in this poem is very strong, espcecially in the lines 'I can feel HER beneath my skin
She lingers
Behind the light
Flowing through my fingers'
excellent job, well done. |
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Re: The Monster in My Bed
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by freckle on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:21:57 PM AEST
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Wow....good write. Very dark but still incredibly well written. May you sleep with peace tonight!
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Re: The Monster in My Bed
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:29:13 PM AEST
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hey gurly gurl where are you i could really use your eyes right now
this is a great write |
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Re: The Monster in My Bed
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:01:04 PM AEST
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As always, a good write, but dark. Stay strong and keep battling that demon; you don't have to give in this time....*hugs*
Scorp. |
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