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Untitled
Contributed by
Elatednbliss
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 07:42:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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For christ's sake
I just wanted some attention
you know the kind that's
so called evil
where even a kiss will
send my soul a first class
ticket to burn in hell...
where oh my gosh liking someone
is a fobidden fruit
so let's get treated like
a little kid!
Now where are you going again.
oh right.... to prison, oh I ment home.
Your going home.
what's that you said
"freedom?"
"what's that?"
Huh... should've known
there'd be a catch!
Copyright ©
Elatednbliss
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2005-05-26 19:42:25]
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Re: Untitled
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 07:59:23 PM AEST
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Well, I agree that it is a sarcastic 'tude, but it kind of sounds like you may have some real downer people around you. Like they don't understand optimism, encouragement, youth: Am I right. Maybe not, but that was the impression I got.
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Re: Untitled
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:19:23 PM AEST
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| nice work:) |
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