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A story of Love
Contributed by
Jayraja
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Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Life is full of complications
Love is the implication
Lonely hearts aching
Loving hearts needing
When life seems bleak
Enters an angel sleek
Charming the lonely
Warming the gloomy
Alas! when taking the bold move
And expressing the solemn love
A polite and kindly rejection
Leads to more of dejection
Yet the heart is a mystery
Even it becoming a history
Past still deep inside persists
Deleting the thoughts resists
Once again life is so miserable
With nothing around desirable
Then comes out of the blue, shinning
Yet another angel, so adoring
With a heart full of love and longing
Delicately soft and deliciously alluring
Tenderly offering herself unconditionally
Catching me flat footed, exuberantly
Nagging doubts prevail, as I ponder
Am I worthy of this lovely, I wonder
As I introspect, this angel boards
Gently into my heart filling the void
Copyright © 2002 Joel Raja Kumar J
Copyright ©
Jayraja
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2003-01-01 20:00:00]
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Re: A story of Love
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by OreO on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:03:28 AM AEST
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Yesssssss you are worthy of the lovely, dont wonder just go with your heart pleaseeee pleaseeee lol...ok im sooo sorry i get carried away i admit it, i am a big sucker for love, i say follow your heart.....i wouldnt say jump in with both feet full steam ahead, i mean being cautious is very important as well ....but if it's in your heart and you want to be with this woman go for it....and remember do not let your mind confuse your heart.....they will play warfare with one another in times like these.....thank you for sharing this one my friend....
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Re: A story of Love
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by venkat on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:18:48 AM AEST
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| sure you are worthy.How lucky! you coul have an adoring angel. Very nice flow. Happy new year Jayaraja!...Venkat |
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Re: A story of Love
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by Jayraja on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 11:37:00 AM AEST
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Thank you Venkat for reading my work and for the kind words of encouragement. I look forward to read your works too.
Happy New Year.
Love from India (coimbatore) - Joel - |
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