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Hollow
Contributed by
emokid
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:54:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hollow
maybe I am
so what of it
all it means is
I gave you everything
foolish stupid me
turn your back on me
go back to your "friend"
Like I care
here take your knife back too
maybe I'll die from blood loss
If I'm lucky
Please god let me die
cause I don't want
to know my future
call me a fatalist
maybe for once I'll die
can you see the black void
where my heart used to be
can I trade this hollow feeling
for one of true hate
hate for myself
hate for the things I do
was it that I wasn't good enough
so I'll get up with my broken back
and fractured knees to learn
to walk again and walk away
so with knife to my throat
and blood soaked shirt
I scream you never loved me
and became hollow once again
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emokid
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2005-05-26 18:54:53]
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Re: Hollow
(User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:32:19 PM AEST
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:( i feel ur pain here! it will be ok, hopefully. i know i dont feel like im gonna make it, but hang in there.
*~peace and love~* |
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Re: Hollow
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by hotie05 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:25:37 PM AEST
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| i've felt this way so many times |
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Re: Hollow
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by romance_pyro on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 11:24:49 AM AEST
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| It hurts when your are betrayed but life is always better than death. At least you can still have some fun. Deep write and nice. |
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