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twisted life
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:28:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i grew up with you dad
for now i will call you mark
since you don't deserve the name dad
since you teared what little love i had
and shreaded it some more
i dont know what i feel
i just feel this lump in my throat
like i want to cry
like i want to scream
i dont know how to control these emotions
i dont know what they mean
i dont care
all zipped up inside
like a stuffed toy
only my stuffing has been torn out
and ripped up by the dogs
iam hollow and wasted
because of you im messed up
inside and out
i think things i shouldnt
i do things i wouldnt normally do
sometimes i think im following in your footsteps
but then i realise your dead to me
your off to start your knew life with your family
your two step-sons
hope they can be better than me
hope they call you dad one day
hope you forget about the daughter you once had
what was her name again?
who cares?
not me
i dont care
i dont sit here crying
over how we said our goodbyes
lets just say
we both wanted to go our separted ways
you wanted love
and i wanted my dad
but they cant be found in the same place
since you and mum arent anymore
its over
i understand
what i dont is
why did you leave forever
when you could stay just for a while
to watch me grow
to laugh and joke like we use to
ok we werent the most normal family
kinda twisted and weird
but every family is
in it's own way
i suppose we were like well,normal
but now were not anymore
your on your plane ride over the sea
to get married
you know,fine,forget about me
iam not needed
or wanted in any way
i wrote this to make myself try and feel better
but its making me worse
twisted the way i loved you as a dad
twisted is this life i live
forever confused and unloved
.g.o.o.d.b.y.e.
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2005-05-26 18:28:22]
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Re: twisted life
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by so_fetch on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:36:43 PM AEST
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| The way you wrote so personally is what made this poem good. 4 stars baby |
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Re: twisted life
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by mylastwords on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:49:14 PM AEST
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hey,
this is an awsum poem. i really felt it. my parents are split n i used 2 hate my dad. we'r stil not that close but. i hope you are ok. if u wana talk or sumthin send me a msg, im here.
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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