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the thorn of our love

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:58:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

(verse1)
its said that every rose has its thorn
and now it has shown itself and torn
a hole right throught the middle of my heart

because of you i once knew true love
but now that you have taken that love away
i dont think that i can face the comming days

(chorus)
you said you wouldnt hurt me
never leave me or decieve me
that never did you wanna leave my side

but now i see the truth
and although it hurts
i see that you just lied

i tried to make you happy
but i did not suceed
i tried not to be selfish
but you left cause of my greed

now im all alone, and drownin in my tears
and ive lost what ive been searchin for for years

(verse2)
i know that im not perfect
that i dont even come close
but i love you more than anything in this world

now im dying cause im without you
cant you see what you have done
cause i know for me that youre the only one

(chorus)
you said you wouldnt hurt me
never leave me or decieve me
that never did you wanna leave my side

but now i see the truth
and although it hurts
i see that you just lied

i tried to make you happy
but i did not suceed
i tried not to be selfish
but you left cause of my greed

now im all alone, and drownin in my tears
and ive lost what ive been searchin for for years

(bridge)
now girl cant you see
im down on my knees
and beggin of you please for one more chance

i promise ill try harder
if youd please
just give me one more chance

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

Copyright Â© bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-05-26 17:58:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the thorn of our love (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:26:53 PM AEST
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A great write and it is a sad song with so many verses of pain. You write your emotions very well and I really enjoyed this read. My life is on the same road you speak about so I can feel your pain. Bye for now and keep up the writes….Steve

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