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False Hope
Contributed by
Thelonelycheeze
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:47:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I was convinced that we had a chance.
I had all of my hopes tied up into a dream.
Since then, I've come to realize
That dream was nothing but a mere fairy tale fantasy.
It's unfortunate that I spend so much time dreaming of what
Will knowingly continue to be a false hope.
The only problem is I love him more than life itself.
No matter how hard I try not to,
It is his face that I see every day and night
Whenever I close my eyes.
Then I am reminded that he believes my lie.
When he looks at me,
He assumes that I look at him as
Nothing more than a friend.
If only he knew what I really saw.
I see someone I care about more than
I could have ever imagined,
Someone who knows me almost as well as I know myself.
Someone who I trust,
Someone I Long to be with,
Someone I cry to when I am sad.
I see the only person who has ever understood me.
The only guy I ever fell in Love with.
The one person I can see myself with,
And can't see myself without.
He's the reason I wake up everyday.
My reason for not giving up on life.
He is the person who makes me believe
That there is still hope.
I wont give up,
Not just yet.
So, for now, I will shed more tears,
And I will continue to dream of that day when my
"False Hope" becomes true.
Copyright ©
Thelonelycheeze
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2005-05-26 17:47:58]
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Re: False Hope
(User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:00:52 PM AEST
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First of all, I would like to welcome you to the site. There are some great people here and may you always feel welcomed!
Now about your poem. It is a nice poem. I liked the lines:
The one person I can see myself with,
And can't see myself without.
Love is a hard thing sometimes. I wish you the best with it.
Thanks for sharing!
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Re: False Hope
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by somedaylove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:46:35 PM AEST
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| Time will tell all...........keep up the faith and love..........may someday your dreams come true........nice write keep it up |
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Re: False Hope
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 07:46:22 PM AEST
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| This was written with real emotion and I thinks it's good. Why don't you tell this guy how you feel? You won't know if he feels the same unless you voice your true thoughts....Good Luck in love, and welcome to YPDC. Scorp. |
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