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Looking
Contributed by
Northernrick
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:04:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Im a bad boyfriend
Im a bad Friend
Will this pain just ever end...
Nothing I do is ever right,
Everything I do starts a fight
I try so hard
I do my best,
My best is bad
And so is the rest...
All im doing is looking for love
Love I can find,
once im gone
and im up above...
Im never happy
Im always sad
the things I do
makes everyone mad
I’ve had enough
All I want to do is run..
Run from everyone
The easiest way
is with this gun......
Copyright ©
Northernrick
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2005-05-26 17:04:08]
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Re: Looking
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:32:30 PM AEST
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| great write , i can totaly relate |
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Re: Looking
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:29:41 AM AEST
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Very good poem! I can relate to a lot of your writing..cept I'm a girl. This was one of your better writes, not my favorite but its up there. Your thoughts seemed more organized, I really liked this.
Keep writing!
xoxo
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