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Elements of Life
Contributed by
crimson_regret420
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 03:30:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Death,
Enticingly sweet,
To one young of age,
With impossible standards to meet,
Hate,
Easily felt,
But hard to take away,
Like the sting of a whipping belt,
Love,
The death of the heart,
Believing in only one person,
Only later to part,
You,
The death of my soul,
Telling me you love me,
Your heart is so cold.
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2005-05-26 15:30:49]
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Re: Elements of Life
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by midnightwriter on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 03:32:05 PM AEST
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Re: Elements of Life
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:32:38 PM AEST
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This is a heavy poem...Don't give in to that dark call; don't let ANYONE make you feel small...Good luck, and keep writing; I think you have talent!
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Re: Elements of Life
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:40:27 PM AEST
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