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If I could I would
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If I could make things right I would
I'd make them fall for eachother
And make it so it left no scars
On the hearts of all the others
If I could fix the world I would
So they could be together
I'd do it here and now
I'd face the storms they'd have to weather
If I could bend the laws of love I would
Make these two hearts united
And make everyone see the same
No points of view divided
If I could make them happy I would
Just to see them smile
And though it would cause my heart pain
I'd forget after a while
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2005-05-26 13:09:09]
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Re: If I could I would
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:13:21 PM AEST
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Awww.Kiela...
This is so sweet, and it's so sad, yet so lovely of you to be willing to sacrifice your own desires for a friend.
You are a good friend, Kiela. I hope they know that.
This is a lovely poem hun, I hope you feel a lot better soon.
*hugs tons and tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: If I could I would
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:36:20 PM AEST
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That was a great write! Its amazing that even though you have feelings for the guy, you are willing to make them happy. I hope this girl know how lucky she is to have a great friend like you at her side.
Keep writing
keep smiling |
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Re: If I could I would
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:10:25 PM AEST
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| This is so nice, but heartbreakingly so...Kie you are eternally sweet, always thinking of others, but it wouldn't be bad to look out for yourself once in awhile too....Don't worry; love never lets sweet people like you stay single...; ) *hugs* Scorp. |
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Re: If I could I would
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:32:40 PM AEST
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your a great lady kie a great writter 2 bad there weren't more like u and at such a young age, u got character kid not 2 mention courage, proud 2 call u a friend any day . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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