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My Demonic Little Angel
Contributed by
nanonan
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:05:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My demonic little angel
How bright you are today.
Wings of gold, and eyes of truth.
An honor for you to stay.
My demonic little angel
With hair as raven, black.
Showering you with all I possess,
But still you say I lack.
My demonic little angel
Skin so radient and fair.
You walk away and I silently follow
You into the demonic lair.
My demonic little angel
Your touch was so sincere.
I gave to you what can only be given once
A lover's touch without fear.
My demonic little angel
How can you be so blind.
You ran away, and I followed dumbly,
But it is your heart I cannot find.
My demonic little angel
How could you be so cruel?
Taking what you need only for yourself
I know that this is true.
My demonic little angel
Tell me was it good for you?
Expect no mercy from me or your soul,
I hope you understand my clue.
My demonic little angel
So radient and so pure.
Your wings have dulled to the darkest black.
You have become your own lure.
My demonic little angel
Tell me now how does it feel?
A soul forever shattered
By you and your demonic deal.
My demonic little angel
Do you expect me to forgive you this time?
No, not ever, my demonic little angel,
For the soul you shattered was mine.
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2005-05-26 08:05:05]
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Re: My Demonic Little Angel
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:06:30 AM AEST
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you stated your feelings well here
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Re: My Demonic Little Angel
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by Mild_Tempest on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:13:15 AM AEST
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| That's a really good poem! The flow was excellent. It tells a true story that is complex and complete. Keep writing. |
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Re: My Demonic Little Angel
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by Pisces101 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:11:28 AM AEST
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This poem is awesome. Your style is similar to mine. I am going through the same thing right now. Your verses were ordered very well and you stuck to the rythm very very well. Keep it up.
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Re: My Demonic Little Angel
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 03:45:38 PM AEST
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Hmmm I liked this, and could feel the sting in your words...Nice work!
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