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Angel
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:10:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You’re a wonderful person to me
You always picked me up if I was down
You were always around if I had a frown
You never pushed me around or put me down
You are an angel sent from above
I’m glad you were sent to me
I could not imagine what my life would be
If only you knew how much you are an angel to me
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jmpy84
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2005-05-26 01:10:56]
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Re: Angel
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by nanonan on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:09:11 AM AEST
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| It sounds like you really like this person... but it also looks like you can't tell them how you feel. It's happened to me so often. I see the dependance, also. Using a conparison such as an "angel" makes me think that you can't be without them, and if they left, you would have nothing. There is love, and loyalty. It may be short. But it's simple. I've always believed that a single red rose has a greater impact than a bouquet. I like it, I think it was well written, and I would like to read more. |
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Re: Angel
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:48:52 AM AEST
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| How very nice a poem that was. I'm fond of those friends who are there for you when you need em. good job and keep it up. |
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Re: Angel
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:26:16 AM AEST
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Josh this is a beautiful poem, but it seems like ur angel is someone who u love. U should tell her exactly how u feel. A warm heart touching write filled with an angelic essence.
love always ya friend,
~sue~ |
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