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SEEING YOU IN MY DREAMS!!!^_^
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:54:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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WHEN I SEE YOU ITS ALWAYS IN A DREAM.
i DREAM I SEE YOU IN A DREAM.
Then I get my bloodstream up . CAUSE I always see you in my dreams.
I think I see the beam of light.
Then I see that my esteem is low cause it was just a dream.
I always daydream of you.
I dream of you And me telling you to phone me.
I scream out your name.
But the pain of you not being there makes me know it is just a dream.
where do you go when it is just a dream.
And there isnt nothing you can do.
There isnt too much I can say.
Im hurting over you.
That I want more than just a dream.
I want you.
But there isnt nothing but pain.
And I dont gain nothing but pain.
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Re: SEEING YOU IN MY DREAMS!!!^_^
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 02:32:20 AM AEST
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Not too bad at all.
It may alittle bit of work and can be a master piece.
hows this?
WHEN I SEE YOU ,
YOUR ALWAYS IN MY DREAM.
I DREAMED YOU IN MY DREAM.
Then my blood boils over .
CAUSE I see you in my dreams.
I see the beam of light.
I knew itwas just a dream.
I always daydream of you.
I dream of you togetherI
I scream out your name.
where do you go
when it is just a dream.
And theres nothing you can do.
Theres not much I can say.
I am hurting in my fantasy
That I want more then just a dream.
I want you.
But theres nothing but pain.
And I dont gain nothing but pain.
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Re: SEEING YOU IN MY DREAMS!!!^_^
(User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:17:14 AM AEST
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| A very nice poem that was full of anguish and longing. I'm glad you shared it and encourage you to keep it up! |
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