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NO LILACS THIS YEAR
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:48:56 PM in AEST
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Frosted lilac bush
Nipped the tender blossoms
Will miss pretty smell
A vase of lilacs
One or two, whole house cologne
Gone..... lavender dreams
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
May 24, 2005
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Lovingcritters
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by venkat on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:23:43 AM AEST
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It is disheartening to see the frosted lilac bush..and the vase without their splendour..
Both stanzas are absolutely beautiful..
Dear Connie, this is highly impressive work.
hugs..venkat |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:33:27 AM AEST
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Ya the pictures are so beautiful Consue.
And your write is so amazing.
love ya hugs |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by bernard on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:26:19 AM AEST
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| ConSue a pem that shows spring is here grest. bernard |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:19:41 AM AEST
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How sad it is not to have the Lilacs that grace us every spring...
Shari |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:01:53 AM AEST
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beautiful work.
Johnny. |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:46:45 PM AEST
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Wow, 2 beautiful haiku in one. Sorry about the lilacs. Guess you will just have to go buy a lilac candle. Better luck next year.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:03:12 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifull pictures-n-nice pictures.
luv yo brat,
emy |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:25:53 AM AEST
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Beautiful Haiku ConSue.
Never saw you one do before. These is so impressive and sad.
Indeed, this year I haven't seen lilac that makes me doubly sad reading the Haiku
Twice sad! at reading this beautiful! and deeply impressive Haiku in its poignancy..
Warm love
Elizabeth |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:34:55 PM AEST
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| these were okay haikus, consue. but i rather like the haikus that arent fragmented like these and flow like a sentence or a verse. |
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Re: NO LILACS THIS YEAR
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:35:24 AM AEST
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these are wonderfully sweetly fragrant haikus:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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