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One by One
Contributed by
wizard
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:30:50 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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One by one they go away,
Why can't I find one that will stay?
Perhaps it's me who actually leaves
Afraid to hold on...afraid to believe,
Afraid what I'll see
Afraid what I'll find
Afraid to let anyone into my mind
One of these days I'll have to hold on
I'll just have to wait for the fear to be gone
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-05-25 21:30:50]
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Re: One by One
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by Kitty06 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:47:57 PM AEST
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| The second section of the poem needs some work. Add some more lines to it, what are you afraid of? How powerful is this fear? What might they see in your mind? A giant monster, raging and destroying? Or perhaps a timid mouse? Give the poem life and description. |
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Re: One by One
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:15:13 PM AEST
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| i like this alot, and i know how you feel. I still let my fears run my life sometimes, and it was hard for me to get where i am now, but i'll tell you, it's worth all that you go through if you get to a place you want to be. Keep it up. |
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Re: One by One
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:02:47 PM AEST
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I understand this poem only too well, I am afraid. When the heart has been bounced and bruised a couple of times, you are not eager to have it happen again and it hard to trust yourself or anyone else in love. Don't give up. I think we will know when it is right. The heart wants what it wants and when that right someone comes, there will be no stopping it.
Good luck,
Rita |
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Re: One by One
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:25:48 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed feelings, excellent flow... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: One by One
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by brew on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:04:09 AM AEST
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Deep and heart filled write. Hurt gets the most of people. With feelings, some do not know how to express...or even give back. Takes 2 you know. And some can get it all. Good luck,,,,,it will happen. I thought your write was good.
Brew~ |
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Re: One by One
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:01:50 AM AEST
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beautiful...
who was it that said we have nothing to fear but fear itself? kind of an oxymoron, but it conveys a similar idea. i will tell you though, do not be afraid. read psalms, and you will see... "the Lord God is a sun and a sheild. he bestows honor and favor to those who fear him, who put their hope in his unfailing love." see, the fear of the Lord is the beginning of true wisdom, and it is much different then that paralysing kind of fear that comes from indescision and hoplessness. keep your ears open.. he speaks at unexpected times.
peace,
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Re: One by One
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 07:30:35 PM AEST
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Fait accompli !!
Well, holy heck! Have you been reading my journals again?
Seriously, this could have come straight from my very own pen,
(but you have put it down so much better than I ever could.)
Again, there is that positive hope. That "I know she's out
there" attitude. Wonderful wiz. And oh! how I do relate to this!!
~Breezy
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