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PAROXYSM
Contributed by
kydistortion69
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nothing left to feel this void,
Hollow moment, loss of joy;
Emptiness has become my reward,
Aching fears, a somber accord;
This sadness seems to only accumulate,
Pangs of guilt, a perfect escape;
The loss of emotion has settled inside,
An altruistic gesture, overwhelming fright;
No one left to hear these fears,
Trembling anguish, uncried tears;
This dark cloud of lonely remorse,
unmoveable, nothing more.
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2005-05-25 21:27:47]
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Re: PAROXYSM
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by poetry_schmoetry on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 09:08:57 PM AEST
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| nice... I really like to hear this word used, especially in poetry. With this poem, I can feel what it seems that you felt. It is very clear to me, which is hard to achieve with so many poems trying to do the same thing. I really like it. |
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Re: PAROXYSM
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by sweetpixiegrl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:39:18 AM AEST
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| hey, i really like this. it's so sad but i love the use of more uncommon words. i really need to read my dictionary more... i am not real edumicated...lol gunna check out more of your stuff.. have a great life. :C) |
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Re: PAROXYSM
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by justme03 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 12:35:50 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this alot! ur rhyme sceme is really nice and i can feel the emotion in it. awesome! |
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