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headache
Contributed by
spazz911
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 08:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I can't get the pounding out of my head
the headache you installed in me
it is pushing, and breaking a way out
feel its fits as I lose to you
I am going under, water logged mind
and there is nothing I can do about it
so I might as well not fight the curent
not swim that way, no point to trying
all it does is hurt my brain
too much to think about
I feel the headache coming now
and morten ib wont cure me..wow
too much anger,
too many fits
the screaming I made
made me wanna cut my wrists
feeling the sting
as I inject the shot
to get rid of this migrain
and let my body rot
and then I'll look down on you all
see all the pain you will reak
and no longer
will this headache be mine to beat
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-05-25 20:35:32]
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Re: headache
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 08:54:03 PM AEST
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kc... r u ok? this is real deep sh_it... u dont u dare do nethin... what is makin u feel like this? u seem happy in skool r u just fakin it? u dont have to u kno... plz tell me im here fer u.
"made me wanna cut my wrists
feeling the sting
as I inject the shot"
no no no! what happened? why are u being like this? what is wrong?!
but newhoo... good poem nonetheless, sounds almost exactly like my one poem dont remember what its called... i think i called it headache too lol. good job...
jennie* ~im here fer u just talk to me pleeaze!
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Re: headache
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:48:02 AM AEST
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I liked this poem. I felt your pain and hurt and anger. I am not going to be one to say that death isn't the answer becuz i think different. I believe death is the answer to almost everything and cutting helps ease the pain but that's me. I think you should think about how your life is really going to whether you are going to choose this path or not. Take care...
X+X christina X+X |
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Re: headache
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by Jaycee on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:15:40 PM AEST
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dear kc,
i remember when one of your peers submitted a poem on this site about cutting, and you were like, not u 2, or something like that. like it was a sadness that you felt because another person was in that kind of pain. that told me so much about you, that you cared for that person. i haven't been a freshman for over 30 years so i am sure things have changed, but the workplace can be as cruel and empty as school can be. and quitting is not always a valid option when no one is hiring. if i had known you when i was 15, i am sure i would have wanted to ask you out. you can tell me i don't know the whole you, and that is your perogative of course, but no one knows the whole person when they ask someone out. they ask them out because there is something there that they like. and, trust me, you have plenty to like. |
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Re: headache
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:15:43 PM AEST
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| A good write with so much pain and loss and I'm sorry you have to feel this. take care and know you have friends around here. take care sorry I don't have much time to comment things are busy here in Iraq....Steve |
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