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Broken Cheerios
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:54:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Broken Cheerios
Imagine dippppping your hannnnd into
Liquid Nitrogen...
So cold it crystalizes
splinters in shards
texture so rough like broken cheerios
Convulse and shatter
and never isosceles
Such then, friend of equilateral...
does my heart...
and that cold feeling in my gutttttt
my ear canal my capilaries
are dripping slipping sliding down.........
my intestines are barbed wire
throttling my spine
This is a silent rape, dear,
wherein asphyxiation settles wild eyes
with hand over mouth and nose and
toes are no longer moving but for such lurching thrusting.
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2005-05-25 19:54:56]
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Re: Broken Cheerios
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by Versigh on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:58:00 PM AEST
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| Wow! Awesomely done! I loved it! Totally wicked! Great vision and details... just... wow... |
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Re: Broken Cheerios
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:39:32 PM AEST
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i word that came to my mind was
MANGLED |
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Re: Broken Cheerios
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by ElatedNBliss on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:56:47 PM AEST
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| i loved the silent rape part. Nice write |
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