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You Are The Air That I Breathe
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:10:10 PM in AEST
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As butterflies surround me
Guiding me thru these rays of sunshine
Birds singing me favorite song
I am walking on water
Feeling miles high
Ready to embrase this new journey
Destiny unknown
Curious is me mind
For the unwritten path before me
Show me the way to go
Like a warm wind holding me
Embrasing me with your love
As I fly in the sky high above
Ever so soothing and sweet
You are the air that I breathe
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2005-05-25 19:10:10]
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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe
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by Phantomdream on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:14:23 PM AEST
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| IT's astounding how much this primative poem portrays in such simple language. Lovely thoughts. |
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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:26:39 PM AEST
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I hope that you continue to fly so high in that sky.
Keep on breathing the air, it seems to be doing you good !!
Steve |
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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe
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by ElatedNBliss on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:43:24 PM AEST
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| i wish i had a sweet love like that. |
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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe
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by rosethorn100 on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:11:41 PM AEST
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beautiful poem - wish u lots of lucks - u truly deserve it girlie
huggggggggggggggs xxxxx
rosey |
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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:45:23 AM AEST
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nice feelings of aloofness. This gives all the impressions of air and lightness.
Very well done!! |
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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe
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by Darkhorse71 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 03:16:32 PM AEST
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Nats, this is awesome! the feel of the promise of the joyous unknown.
Peace and Hugs, john |
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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:20:31 AM AEST
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So this was your first write, Nats? Can't tell it. It's beautiful with it's imagery and wonderful words.
Huggssss
Tim:) |
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