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Untitled
Contributed by
Versigh
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:03:46 PM in AEST
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Goodbye to everything.
yes, even the love I have for you.
Love doesn't exist anymore,
It has been replaced with something new,
something called hate.
I said I could never love you,
I lied.
I want to kill you now.
Maybe your lifeless corpse will listen.
I told you I loved you,
but I bet you just felt sorry,
you admited you had those feelings too,
thanks for falsifying.
I was there when you needed me.
I constantly asked you what was wrong.
Your lack of openness is what tore us apart.
Sorry I let you get away with too much,
I thought I was just being nice.
I stand before you now,
armed with a simple kitchen knife.
I creep the blade across my wrist.
I'll make you watch me bleed.
I made a promise to myself,
if you hurt me, i'll hurt myself worse.
You messed with my heart,
damaged my brain,
You threw me in a clear box to watch me die.
Is this hurting you? Prove it.
We had everything, didn't you see?
What? Your tears don't scare me!
I'm growing weaker now, won't you join me?
My pain is your pain.
How will you deal with your part?
Take away the blade and cut yourself open.
Let the blood flow.
Did we die holding hands?
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Versigh
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Re: Untitled
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:47:54 PM AEST
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WOW. all i can say is AMAZING and wow. absolutely amazing... that is just so awesome i LOVE this piece. i have tears flowing from my eyes from reading this (that means its rilly good). OMG i cant put into words how this poem just flows so amazingly well and just... wow. lol im repeating myself but i wanna get my opinion across that this is an inspiring and amazing (even if sad) poem and i love it! the emotion in it is so overpowering... not to mention it is totally true and i can completely agree with your veiw on this and i can relate (also rilly good lol) great job!
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Re: Untitled
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by vampyrekiss on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:54:16 AM AEST
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This was really good, Full of emotion. It was raw and full of truth, Im trying to find words to explain how I feel about this and I am left speechless. Good write and keep it up it all I can say. Oh yes and never kill yourself over someone :)
Lots of Love
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Re: Untitled
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by ElatedNBliss on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:33:18 PM AEST
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| ahhh.... i just love the part where she put in u a cleart box to watch u die. i felt every line...like u were readin it to me. it drips with emotion and u really reallyt get ur point across...now one of my favs. yay! :) nice write keeep it up. |
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