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I try
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
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I try to live and let live
always try to give and give
but where it gets me I don't know
surely like to tell you where you could go.
~*~
If I knew then what I know now
wouldn't have joined that debate no how
I went in there with an open mind
and found that there its cool to be unkind.
~*~
I put my heart and soul in all I do, though
tonight your words cut through and through
ohhhhhhhhh what the hell it was last year
and now's a new one, starts right here.
~*~
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2003-01-01 11:30:00]
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Re: I try
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 06:37:18 PM AEST
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I liked this one to... I can't help but feel i have something to do with you writing these poems. If thats the case I am very sorry.
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Re: I try
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 04:00:44 PM AEST
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| go girl, give it all you got, cos you've got lots to give |
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Re: I try
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by nomad on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST
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| You write with depth and insights that are awesome, Lady Fawn. I like your writing style very much. |
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Re: I try
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:20:57 PM AEST
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| i like the rythym of the poem if i got the rythym you intended if any... im not good at analyzing poetry maybe you could help me |
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Re: I try
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:18:23 PM AEST
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| I can tell by the last couple of poems, that something was peeving you off. I can feel the anger in this write Nessa. *S* Cynthia |
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