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Another love poem :)
Contributed by
ElatedNBliss
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:22:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Two hearts as one
two souls combined
is a true love
in all lifetimes
they'd give for each
and not ask why
And if one had
yes one would die
Give one last breathe
for just one kiss
Hold on too tight
cuase they'll be missed
than think of times
when all was well
never forget
in love you fell
And with that thought
one'd give a smile
Becuase I know
Your love's worthwhile...
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ElatedNBliss
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2005-05-25 17:22:41]
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Re: Another love poem :)
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:44:15 PM AEST
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| hey, i read ur comments on my poems and figured id check out some of urs, and i think this is realy nice :) good job:) |
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Re: Another love poem :)
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by Thin_skin on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:22:30 PM AEST
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| no one to write these for? well you obviously have a lot of love to give, waiting to be given. I would take this kind of love, it seems real. I like it very much. |
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