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10:52 pm
Contributed by
ElatedNBliss
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:14:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I guess things are back to normal
things are as they should
Remember the "don't let hers."
Becuase we'd never would...
Let her breathe on her own
instead let her rot all alone
Yes we swear we love her
but we'll never ever trust her
So take away everything she wants
put on limits that will stunt
her ability to grow
A life will be something unknown
Let's put her in prison
for her own sake
and le'ts constantly remind her
of all her mistakes
a dissapointment is what we'll tell her
often say she's a failure
hold everything at a reach's arm
and say the world is doing more harm
Her leaving for good
won't be long
But we'll never admit
that we were in the wrong
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ElatedNBliss
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2005-05-25 17:14:43]
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Re: 10:52 pm
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by crimson_regret420 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:33:50 PM AEST
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| i love it. My parents feel the same way about me as well so i kan completely relate. keep writing! Elena |
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Re: 10:52 pm
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:49:46 PM AEST
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It sounds like a side of an overprotective parent. It touches me though. Nice!
T.B |
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Re: 10:52 pm
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by anonymous1 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:29:15 PM AEST
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when i read this, i could totally relate it to my life and how i think my parents view me at times too. this is a great poem!
*JESSI* |
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