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death is here
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:29:45 PM in AEST
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lost without you
filled with pain
broken hearted
slashed my veins
empty soul
cold black heart
me your death toll
played my part
dying now
slowly fading
dont know how
patiently waiting
death is coming
death is near
life without you
is my fear
soon im gone
you dont care
no more pain
death is here
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
Copyright ©
bethers_is_my_baby
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2005-05-25 16:29:45]
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Re: death is here
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by ElatedNBliss on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:28:36 PM AEST
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| i love your peom...felt ever word. sad to say i've been down than road. too many times..but that's another story for another day. |
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Re: death is here
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:32:24 PM AEST
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its a good write and ur right death is here and he just commented on ur poem bye
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Re: death is here
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by andyp89057 on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 12:55:24 AM AEST
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| really like how your poem near lost its flow. |
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