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love hurts
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shrunkin_fool34142316
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:15:25 PM in AEST
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i used to think being without you scared me most,
now i begin to think being with u is the thing.
i thought we were fine, we were getting so close.
i wanted to show you how much i cared
but i guess we just weren't meant to be,
now i see that it's not just because we were scared.
i knew she wanted to ruin us from the start
i knew she wanted me away from my baby,
but i didn't think she was strong enough to tear my world apart.
have u ever had the perfect life?
where everything is getting all better?
where ur in love with the most precious person u hope to make ur wife?
then have someone come in between
to try to take u from ur baby girl
to pop up and make a hugh sence
i just wish my baby knew,
everything i feel for you is true.
i am in love with you.
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Re: love hurts
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by heartquake on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:34:47 PM AEST
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| whoever invented love was pretty messed up... for something thats definition means emotional happiness in so many words sure brings enough emotional pain and damage.... i think that your poem pretty much summed that idea up pretty good... i'm a sucker for emotional pain poems like this when it revolves around love and misunderstanding... keep up the good work |
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Re: love hurts
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by ElatedNBliss on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:36:26 PM AEST
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| i'm beginning to think that love just suxs... but a life without love...is lonely. nice write |
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Re: love hurts
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:14:31 AM AEST
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love has it's ups and downs and it is filled with confusion and problems. But once you find the one you love with all of your heart you will know that it was meant to be but sometimes the other doesn't feel that way. I used to think love sucked and i dodn't want to feel that but when i did i found the guy i want to be with for the rest of my life.. great poem
christina``` thanx for the comment |
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