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make me something
Contributed by
rustygrl33
on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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tears in time; make me something
my person is so very much linging
love is so hidden away
its raining inside; make me something
for them, always so true and pure
smells of darkness falling upon
no cries, no pain; make me something
stares of upset hearts, continue
cant life wonder somewhere else
little things cry golden tears; make me something
whys and wants for undone needs
looking for something so cold, so hard
lights and stars of them; make me something
no sense in this, send me away
why and my person will never be told
eyes behind the glass; make me something
ring it up, prices of my person
what i love and have wanted
death calls me, shut out; make me something
creeps find it inside, interrupted
total taste of nothing fatal
powder shaken down evily; make me something
stopped, frozen and all gray
balls and shapes of unjust
pinches or more of joy; make me something
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Re: make me something
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by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 01:43:35 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: make me something
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:23:51 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful...i have not read a poem that's stirred up as many emotions as this in a long time...god, i love this... |
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Re: make me something
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 06:59:27 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was pretty good although it was hard to understand sometimes. i can relate to some of this.
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Re: make me something
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:26:32 AM AEST
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| great write |
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