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Thoughts
Contributed by
skinney86
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:17:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When it's raining outside
Thoughts of you make the sun come out
When there isn't a star in the sky
thoughts of you makes the clouds go away,
and makes the stars so bright
When the day seems to be goin wrong
thoughts of you makes the day great.
I could be doing anything,
thoughts of you are always there
making me smile that everlasting glow
making me be the person i am today
all because of these thougths of you
the thoughts of the angel on my shoulder
and that angel is you
But those thoughts don't just lie in my head,
these thoughts are deep in my heart as well
Always there to show me how I feel about you
These thoughts make my heart beat both fast and slow
Making every step worth steping
and making every day worth living
Then i think about life without you,
I can't picture my life with out you,
I wouldn't have my angel,
i wouldn't have my best friend
without you is like not having oxygen
you are the force that keeps me goin
that fire that keeps burning inside of me
losing you, is losing everything i dreamed about
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skinney86
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2005-05-25 12:17:10]
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Re: Thoughts
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:04:23 PM AEST
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| great poem, yew really have deep feelings for this friend, im grateful that yew have such a great friend..i have many like that too, thats what truly keeps me alive, keep writing~Chrissy |
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Re: Thoughts
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:33:19 PM AEST
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| This was a thoughtful poem in terms of the nice things you had to say about the person, but I found it to be a little repetitive, which took away from it a bit for me....Keep writing, and this will improve. Scorp. |
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