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Enough
Contributed by
PainfulSpirit06
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:16:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Betrayal, Lies, & Deceit
These are emotions that I feel
My mind is still contemplating on how,
how could someone do this to someone they love
Confusion, Wondering
Wondering if it'll happen again
My associates say it will, your mouth says that it won't
Yet this is your BEST relationship?
Isn't this the ONLY relationship you've done this in?
Yet still more confusion
Trust
Can I even trust you?
Do I even want to trust you?
Will my mind or my heart let me?
Devotion, Commitment
Something that we say we both want
Yet truly, I've been the only one
devoted, commited
I know you can be, that's why this hurts so
But you say you're emotions took control
But I say, you're emotions should have stopped you
that's if you have any ounce of emotion for me
Communication
That's why we are in this now
No communication between us
You went elsewhere to...........conversate
Our problems, and your own
When we are supposed to be the two people
conversating & communicating
Love, Heart, Soul
There is no doubt that I love you will all my heart and my soul
But will that be enough for me to forgive your
betrayal, lies, & deceit?
Will it be enough to annihalate my
confusion & my wonders?
Will it be enough for me deal with the fact that you weren't
devoted or committed
to me AND this relationship?
Will it be enough to believe you'll come to me FIRST
for communication,
and not go astray?
Will it be enough for me to stay, with you, & not be tempted
to destroy your trust for me, and do the same thing to you for revenge?
I hope it'll be, I want it to be, I PRAY that it is.....
Enough
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2005-05-25 12:16:06]
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Re: Enough
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by Skinney86 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:19:35 PM AEST
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| This poem has a lot of emotion written into it, very nice peom honestly. . . Opens a lot of questions with no real answers |
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Re: Enough
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:42:59 PM AEST
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gawsh that is amazing... very strong willed and emotional. i like it a lot and can relate... decisions are tough but you just need to trust yourself and do what's best for YOU. im not going to tell you what you should do because i dont know the whole situation. just follow your heart, if you ever needa talk u can talk to me. im here
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: Enough
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by sadsadman on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:54:33 PM AEST
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| i feel everything for i ve been through most of what you said but in the end i still lost the game good luck and thank you |
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