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your life, my art
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:23:21 AM in AEST
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life is a canvas
paint it as you may
we all start out with white
but red ill paint mine today
burn my portrait burn
nicotine stains and lipstick
to hell in a hand basket we go
im ready how about you?
murder lead with ink
catatonic bullets
tears of lead
pry the brain from my head
torn pages of persuasion
lullaby of a blackened heart
in disposable pain
riding on the tears of god
you want it as bad as i do
i can read you like a book
you feel it too
life as art
ill paint your portrait too.
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Re: your life, my art
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:33:37 AM AEST
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I really like this piece.
It tells alot what your saying.
Life is a big trial.
take care awsome write. |
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Re: your life, my art
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:34:20 AM AEST
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oh i do like this!! its a very mysterious read and 1 of power and strength
great poem i really enjoyed reading this and the metephors were brilliant |
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Re: your life, my art
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 06:02:58 AM AEST
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| Definitely this is a brilliant write. I enjoyed it. venkat |
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Re: your life, my art
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:02:50 PM AEST
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| This was a good piece! Creative wordplay. Sometimes those make the best poems...the ones you just start writing, not really knowing where it's headed... Scorp. |
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Re: your life, my art
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:37:34 AM AEST
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This poem is great. I liked the way you described the little things like the tears of lead. It fit perfectly together and it was brillant.
take care
christina |
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