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The rain and you begin to sing
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:34:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The rain and you.
The rain and you begin.
The rain and you begin to sing.
The rain and you begin to sing; my fingers paint the sun.
The sun my fingers paint the rain and you begin to sing.
You begin to sing
You begin to sing, my fingers paint the rain.
You sing, my fingers paint; the sun begins to rain
The sun my fingers sing, the rain begins to paint you.
The rain begins, the sun to you; my fingers sing:
Painting on a sunny day
The rain storm sings
my fingers tear the canvas
my fingers tear your face
the sunny day the rain storm
sings.
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2005-05-25 01:34:54]
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Re: The rain and you begin to sing
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by marshmalloska on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:26:19 AM AEST
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I dont feel qualified to make any intellectual comments about such an amazingly clever poem, so ill just say that it was beautiful, and leave it at that
*It was beautiful* |
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Re: The rain and you begin to sing
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 11:39:16 PM AEST
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| i liked this, very original, and beautiful. |
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