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Hob goblins of the mind
Contributed by
euphoria
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:33:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The tables have turned on you,
Weep as you sit there,
Weep and try to unmask the reality,
The deception....the contention
Deceit is your god.....
Sycophant of the minds....
Stare into the darkness and you shall see your soul...
Your flesh...scarred....burnt to the bone.....
Let misery devour you...
Eat out of your very existence,
Castrated....incapacitated....paralyzed
And the bloody world will smirk
As it always does
Coz you’re a loser of the highest order...
You fall on your face,
Break your darling piggy bank
And can’t even run fast enough to gather your scattered wealth...
Bloody pitiful...pathetic you are.....
It’s always the same....
No change...no change.....
I hope you die with your head stuck
In the bloody toilet
And guess what...
It won’t make any difference
Coz you'd look just like turd!
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Re: Hob goblins of the mind
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by Versigh on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:42:21 PM AEST
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| Hm.. I don't really like this one that much. The big words flow nicely but... it seems like really awfully done poetry. I think it could have been pieced together. The last "stanza" was really off... it didn't match up to well with the first bit... |
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Re: Hob goblins of the mind
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by Tenthpower10 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:21:52 PM AEST
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i thought it was pretty cool, really nice words...except for the line 'coz u'd look like a turd'
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