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The Boy I onley Knew
Contributed by
skinney86
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:25:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw the hurt in your eyes
Hiding your pain with so many lies
Trying to hold back your emotions
By goin each day in the same motion
All the hurt i saw in you each day.
Not knowing what to do or what to say
How to make your pain go away
But if i could i would have taken your pain
So i didn't have to see you go insane
I regret not helping you out
Not listening to your silent shouts
Just sitting there watching you
Not knowing what you was about to do.
But i haven't seen you in a year,
And no one but me has shed a tear
For you died because of the hurt
The pain of just feeling like dirt.
You pulled that trigger to end it
To end the suffering that was lit,
By people that just didn't know
By people that made you feel low
They laughed at the way you walked
They laughed at the way you talked
You stood so strong for so long,
That I owe you a paryer and a song
Copyright ©
skinney86
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2005-05-24 22:25:38]
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Re: The Boy I onley Knew
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by Skinney86 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:27:43 PM AEST
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Re: The Boy I onley Knew
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:21:49 PM AEST
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Good, heartfelt emotions...Don't be too harsh on yourself, you probably helped more than you realize...The end result, unfortunately tragic...This is a good poem.
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Re: The Boy I onley Knew
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 08:44:34 AM AEST
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| I like the poem... being that I was in his position for a long time... I wouldn't necessarily call how I dealt with it strength or courage... Very well written and well expressed... |
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