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Serendipity
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:57:11 PM in AEST
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This poem lay still within my pen
where recently I found it...
resting in it's inky den
with a rhyming wrapped around it.
All these years it waited so
to spill out in the minute;
I thought I loved the pen but no!
It was the poetry within it!
Today my Daughter sang to me,
her song in sweetest fashion...
She sang it in a melody
of radiance and passion.
So as to see a blossom grow
and not the sun above it..
I thought I loved the song but no!
It was Katie singing of it!
M.O.H.
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Man_On_High
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2005-05-24 21:57:11]
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Re: Serendipity
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:04:18 PM AEST
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wow, that's excellent. living up to your rep as a great poet!
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Re: Serendipity
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:19:33 PM AEST
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It is excellent and so endearingly sweet. Your Katie will love it.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Serendipity
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:21:34 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Serendipity
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:04:46 PM AEST
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Beautifull!
Luv your writing. U r not a writer u r materpeice maker. That means u r on top.
huiggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Serendipity
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:31:14 AM AEST
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Right off the bat, this is my favorite word, a
toching poem that relates 2 all who go there
a place know as the family . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Serendipity
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:53:58 AM AEST
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| awww so sweet....... |
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Re: Serendipity
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:29:49 AM AEST
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Billy u are in a class of ur own my friend. Your work never ceases to amaze me. A melody to the heart. Your daughter Katie shall love it.
*hugs*
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Re: Serendipity
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:17:28 PM AEST
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What a lovely expression of what matters most. Lovely write! I don't know your Katie - but I can only imagine that she'll love this... every daughter wishes their dad would express such wonderful thoughts.
Write on -
~Snemmy~ |
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Re: Serendipity
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:06:50 PM AEST
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Ah dearest Billy, you never cease to amaze nor to surprise!
The title is what had me intrigued, seeing that seredipity is
one of my most favourite words!! But when I read it, I was so
touched. What an enchanting and beautifully written poem indeed!
Your sweetness shines through your talent for everyone
to see. Who could not love it!?
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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