|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Obviously Untitled
Contributed by
wizard
on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
Writing away, empty my head,
What should I write? What should be said?
I could write of a girl, who doesn't exist,
But I've done that before... she's one on my list
Or perhaps of the one who broke my heart I could write,
but that's been done too... and again it just might
Maybe I'll write of the trees or the sky,
Or the mountains and hills...how they're seen through my eyes
For now in my mind these words stay locked tight,
Until I know just what I should write.
Copyright ©
wizard
... [
2005-05-24 20:39:18]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Obviously Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:48:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i like it alot
good job |
|
|
Re: Obviously Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:45:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh no! You have to let something out or you might get a dreaded case of WRITER'S BLOCK. Can be fatal to a poet. Better take 2 poems and go have a lie down.
Smiles,
Rita |
|
|
Re: Obviously Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:47:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
On the contrary..
To write about what ya can't,
and with such feeling is absolute genius!
Not many poets can do this..
when they're down...they're down..
This write is a testimony to the tenacity
of a true writer...and poet!
Awesome!!
I felt every word bro..
Billy
|
|
|
Re: Obviously Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:06:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I just write whatever comes to mind........alot of times it makes no sense, and then it makes alot. Some of the spirals that swirl in the thoughts can create for you.
Liked it
Brew~ |
|
|
Re: Obviously Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 04:04:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
P~
Even when you are writing about nothing you are writing about more
somethings than most. The title is perfectly applicatory! (How's that
for a thesaurutated word?) [and yes ... thesaurutated IS a word! :P]
(it's in the Breezy dictionary) lmao
okay ... about this here poem. The line ...
"Or the mountains and hills...how they're seen through my eyes"
something there just touches me ... can't explain why, but I love it!
~B
( one to go .... :P )
|
|
|
Re: Obviously Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 02:32:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
...& the need to write is written...I love it!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
~Me
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
