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Nothing
Contributed by
kayden
on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:06:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Look into my eyes
Can you see what I feel
Do you need to brake me
Before You can see the Truth
Your eyes will never be opened
The Vail is to thick
When you see yourself
You will see that you have nothing to lose
Blindsided by the fact
That you have lost everything
Risen in a state of mind
That can't be controled by what you feel
Now no longer you
You see yourself and you lost everything
Look into the mirror
Can you see now what you have become
Nothing but a hollow soul
You spread out your arms
And you fall in the darkness
Now you see yourself
Now you see that you have nothing to lose
Blindsided by the fact
You lost everything
Copyright ©
kayden
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2005-05-24 19:06:47]
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:51:17 PM AEST
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| hey there, long time no see, this sounds like a very emotional wirte, thanx for sharing it. |
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Re: Nothing
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by Addelyn on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:46:52 PM AEST
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| This is very emotional and sounds like you have some issues with this person. Nice write. Keep it up. |
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