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Boyfriend Material
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:57:29 PM in AEST
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Make me out of terry cloth.
I'm not hard, so make me soft.
Make me so I don't get lost
amongst your teddy bears.
Give me two little button eyes,
a button nose, some button fly
jeans so I look like a normal guy
if you cared to compare.
Add a brain, if you wan,t
add a heart because you want
me to be able to feel for your wants
as you sew up my plush little form.
When you're done, hold me close.
Enjoy your creation, the most
I can do for you, my rose,
is to keep you warm.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2005-05-24 18:57:29]
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Re: Boyfriend Material
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:25:51 PM AEST
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It is a sweet little poem. You do need to proof read before you submit, even for punctuation.
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Re: Boyfriend Material
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by Fears on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:35:58 PM AEST
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aww that was such a sweet poem! ( dont mind what dat other person said... Punctuation didnt take away from the love ) Wow, I liked this alot!! ( LOL, jeans so I look like a normal guy)
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Re: Boyfriend Material
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:53:33 PM AEST
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This is a creative, crafty write...Well done.
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