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you and her
Contributed by
lost_in_the_world_09
on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 04:16:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i really loved you and u seemed to care
but then she came in and now im like air
oh how i long to be with you and yet u still want her
now im all alone
and she has u and him
maybe youll feel the way i feel
before my world come to and end
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Re: you and her
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by Fears on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:17:41 PM AEST
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oh that is so sad. It was an alright write. It may have been alittle better if you added more despriptions of your feelings. Sorry, keep writing and posting!!
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Re: you and her
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by so_fetch on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:45:44 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry but people who use 'text talk' really annoy me when writing poetry,,it just looks lazy! |
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