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Walking Dead Waltz
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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well I am focused
for a moment
and I can see
that everything is in motion,
I wish the world would slow down
it just spins me
round and round
constantly battling demons
silently screaming so there's no sound.
No words are spoken
so I remain broken
I don't see nothing
although my eyes are open,
In this burning confusion
there's to much drama to much pain
In Isolation I deeply sigh
as my fascination in life slowly fades.
Forever flowing
where no ones going
I ask the questions
that have no answers
so I am forever unknowing,
footsteps echo down the hall
as I try to recall
what's the reason for being
why should I care at all.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2005-05-24 15:08:57]
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Re: Walking Dead Waltz
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:35:24 PM AEST
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| This seems like a sadly personal write...I enjoyed reading this, and I hope things get better..... Scorp. |
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Re: Walking Dead Waltz
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:26:22 PM AEST
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| Wow...this is such a painful poem that was undoubtedly prompted by an equally painful experience. Your words were so...I don't know how to describe it other than amazing. Excellent write, and if you ever need to talk, I'm a pm away. |
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Re: Walking Dead Waltz
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:53:25 PM AEST
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This was wonderfully writen.
I hope things are getting better.
You know I'm here for you when you need to talk. Let me be there for you.
MUAH
*B HAPPY*
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Walking Dead Waltz
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:21:45 PM AEST
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Very good! Dark and sad but very, very good. Thanks for sharing!
Carol |
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Re: Walking Dead Waltz
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:47:44 PM AEST
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| I often feel this was as well. This was a great write! |
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