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THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
Contributed by
okokjazz
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Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
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THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
please don’t grant it.
Did you notice how quiet that was?
yes.
You WANT people to notice don’t you?
yes.
Why should other people bother with filth like you?
I don’t know.
You don’t know? Then why should they?
I don’t know!
Everyone hurts! Why should you make so much of yours?
Please, I don’t know…
So stop…(pain) Stop! (pain)
(SIGH)(sigh).
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okokjazz
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2003-01-01 01:20:00]
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Re: THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
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by viola on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:25:14 AM AEST
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| makes me think of a schitzophrenic |
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Re: THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
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by okokjazz on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 09:38:57 AM AEST
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| it's about self harm...but schizophrenia is probably close |
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Re: THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 02:56:47 PM AEST
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| this is a really effective way of expressing mental turmoil - you really get the sense of two sides of the same person. i think the line between self harm and schitzophrenia is very fine. great write xxx |
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Re: THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:56:31 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is amazing...so true... |
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Re: THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
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by Chenobi on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:05:11 AM AEST
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| It is very good. Very well done. With the schizophrenia and all. I have one as well. I might submit that one, now that I've read yours. :) |
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Re: THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
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by ml02 on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:04:04 PM AEST
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| this reminds me of one of though teenage fights with an abusive parent and they're tellin' the kid thats filth, just breakin' him down and then they physically hurt him. |
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Re: THIS IS A PLEA FOR ATTENTION
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by tinka_belle on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 07:31:35 AM AEST
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interesting format
i like it
mother daughter arguement????
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