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unknown enemy
Contributed by
kylie
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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People can say mean things, to condemn anothers heart.
To shout out hate, their confidence slowly to depart.
Young people who hurt inside, but have no where to go.
Emptiness, but not self worth, is all they seem to know.
Someone they once thought as a friend, is only a fake.
Rips out anothers soul, all their pride to take.
To make themselves feel good, is to bring another down.
That other person becomes an enemy of the town.
So if you know of this happening, don’t be afraid to say.
That what they’re doing is wrong, they will regret it someday!
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kylie
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2005-05-24 10:58:54]
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Re: unknown enemy
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:24:55 AM AEST
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This poem seemed like a very personal write...Lots of emotion. Very good!
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Re: unknown enemy
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:40:59 AM AEST
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Written with passion
yes people generally suck
and want to bring others down
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