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OR
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:55:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fairy tale endings
Happiness impending
Peace in prosperity
Getting better daily
Optimistic views
Adhering to values
Faith in humanity
Regression not likely
OR
Cowardly retreat
Ending in defeat
Literally swept
Right off your feet
On your death bed
The black angels
Come to meet
The suspense
Is intolerable
To wait
Is sorrowful
Pain translates
Into bountiful
Greatness
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jyssvw22
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2005-05-24 10:55:20]
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Re: OR
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:34:28 AM AEST
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| I really like the way you wrote this...It seems like those wheels of yours are always turning! Scorp. |
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Re: OR
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by CodyJ on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:46:24 PM AEST
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| no idea what your talking about. pleases my ears all the same, though. kudos |
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Re: OR
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:17:36 PM AEST
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I hear ya...
the title says it all..
"or"
good or bad...
brave or cowardice...
rich or poor...
anyway we want
but ends in benevolence..
splendid job my friend..
an experiment in verse..
I loved it!
M.O.H.
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