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gay....
Contributed by
shrunkin_fool34142316
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:24:22 AM in AEST
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I'm giving up
Giving up on us... on life
Because you are my life
I'm sick of trying
Tired of slowly dying
I see it now
We will never be
And that's harder than being me
I hate it I can't have you
I hate it we will never be together
I'm not suppossed to feel this way
Not over you
But I can't seem to sort it out
I can't climb over it
When I try
I always seem to get tripped up
I see it now
We will never be
And that's harder than being me...
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Re: gay....
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:45:38 AM AEST
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| They say love conquers all, and if you believe that, then nothing else will matter...Good write. Scorp. |
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Re: gay....
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by so_fetch on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:10:58 PM AEST
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'Giving up on us... on life
Because you are my life'
Really liked that line! |
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Re: gay....
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by Zeldianus on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:37:04 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write. I sympathise with you completely, because I have experienced the same thing! I am sorry you must also suffer through this.
Best Wishes,
Seth |
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Re: gay....
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by CodyJ on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:44:16 PM AEST
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| provocative. it has something undefinable i like about it. kudos |
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Re: gay....
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by freckle on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 08:55:13 PM AEST
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Good write. Relationships are difficult. You used good imagery and I liked the line about getting tripped up. That's happen many times to me!
Carol |
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