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ONE LUV
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 04:09:58 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
We've both had um go-n-come.
Closing doors of our past alone
But when we meet worries fly.
Yeah, jus roll, roll on by.
One luv that only God can penatrate.
Twenty years of luv, not fate.
One luv, my only luv, always luv
Endured our lives push-n-shove.
In my eyes you stand brave
This luv will withstand our graves.
You're the one that soars free.
Oh we fly free on land-n-sea.
There's nothing stronger than luv
shinning from heaven above.
It's in grass under my feet
a natural luv, how neat.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-05-24 04:09:58]
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Re: ONE LUV
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 04:49:51 AM AEST
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| Emy this is a wonderful love poem. I have reread it twice and will do so agin. Hugs and love from bernard. |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:14:27 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful poem. .love withstands our graves and luv shining from heaven above its in grass..a natural luv" ..beautifully sums up the essence of love..thats great ..:-) venkat |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:36:16 AM AEST
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Aww Emy this was sweet and beautiful just like you.
I loved this.
Jane xxx |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:31:45 AM AEST
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I can only imagine how this
would sound
if you were to sing it..
It's beautiful and I love it..
B |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:59:23 AM AEST
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that was beautiful, so full of emotion.
a pleasure to read |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:12:48 AM AEST
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Love like that doesn't come along often. Emy, you have portrayed it so perfectly. Only God can put a life like this asunder. Beautiful.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 01:04:27 PM AEST
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| another sweet love song |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 02:14:13 PM AEST
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A splendid writting of poetic faith lovely . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:25:00 AM AEST
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emmey your poetry is always outstanding, wenever i need a good poem i know i can always come read your latest :D
SM |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 08:34:29 PM AEST
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| Very nice little poem here Em! You were able to express so much love and emotion in so few words.... Scorp. |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 02:58:25 AM AEST
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Little Emy, this is very touching, and would make a beautiful song! I can hear it being sung through out the land.
You write the best lyrics of anyone I know.
So loving, inspirational and kind
Loved it
Love you
consuemom |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:30:41 AM AEST
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| lovely write from a lovely writer. I likes this very much, so I thank you for the good read,, |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:09:44 PM AEST
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beautifully written, so true, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: ONE LUV
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by speed-of-sound on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 05:23:00 AM AEST
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a really unique dedication to love. passionate thoughts and beautiful images is what this poem creates for me. thanks for sharing,
hannah :) |
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