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Deafening Silence
Contributed by
SuperAsh16
on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 02:25:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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creeping up on death,
laugh all you want,
i'll be sorry,
sore in the afterlife,
peach complexion,
rotting away.
eat at my lifeforce,
slowly catch the plague,
bring your dead,
devour your young,
sleep in deafening silence,
the roar of my heart.
dead is an opinion,
supported by unfinished business,
please wait,
your transaction's processing,
we regret to inform you,
you've been denied.
i will cash your check,
and your little dog too,
bring you to my world,
you can't escape,
breathe my last breath,
i am death.
Copyright ©
SuperAsh16
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2005-05-24 02:25:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Deafening Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:43:51 AM AEST (User
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Interesting poem
Eerily beautiful thoughts
Great Write
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Re: Deafening Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Versigh on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:17:47 PM AEST (User
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*blinks* very intreguing! |
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Re: Deafening Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by kareless on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:46:50 AM AEST (User
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all of who we are we take to death, whether it be here or another time, that is your choice or "opinion"...but we wait in deafening silence for the result to shed light of its last breath...
good poem, express it just as it feels!
K |
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